Trying to move away from the linear time line of the work and focusing on developing the characters attributes a bit more.
I found a dancer who moves like he’s in water and copied the frames into an animation:
The fine arts students set up an informal crit via zoom to do a bit of a progress update
using accessible colloquial language is effective
possibly use the same technique of panning in Lisa Reihana’s In Pursuit of Venus. It would give it more time to breathe
slow down the speed of the animation
single characters are more effective than the linear
add collage of realistic photos to save on time
reminder that this is the first time the view will have seen these characters and stories, so slow it down.
I added some more details to the dancing clip: